martes, 7 de julio de 2015

The Real Story Behind Hassan`s Humillation

Discover the truth behind the well-knowncase of Hassan`s humiliation, all revealed from a diary entry by Amir recently found in the old house  of the already dead Rahim Khan, a friend that amir could trust. I invite you to see the truth with your own eyes:

Many people remember part of the story where Hassan was raped and Amir did anything to help him, an act that changed their lives forever... Well, at least that is what everyone believe about it, the whole story of the kite runner is based on the diary of Amir Urzúa, but years`s before the creation of the book, the page that was supposed to talk about this scene was removed and what we know about the novel is just what other people believe.

Actually, on 28 of September, it was found the original diary entry that refers to the case from what we know, The page was found in Rahim Khan`s rouse, meaning that they were closer than we believed, they were close friends.

What we are going to see is the most important of the case, for the full diary entry click here.

"...I thought that Hassan was going to give the kite to that bastard, but the kite broke when Assef pulled it away from Hassan`s hands, he was grabbing the kite so hard that it broke apart in two pieces. Obviously that idiot wasn`t happy when he saw my kite broken, so he brutally punched my friend, I knew that if I tried to defend him the same fate was waiting for me...".

As we see Assef, a bully with social problem`s, didm`t raped Hassan. The kite was restored by a friend of Ali, Hassan`s father, before they reached Amir home.

So why many people believe that Hassan was raped. It was a myth, many Pashtun`s and Hazaara`s interpreted what the saw, a little kid bleeding broom hub back because he was raped, and the idea prevailed through the years, also the same diary talk about this.

"We were heading to Ali`s house, after what I saw I wouldn`t enter to his house for any reason, I just leaved thin at the entry of the house.

Everyone was looking at us, Hassan was bleeding so much from his back, it seemed that the blood was coming from his butt. Sure that some idiot is going to think something stupid."

So why was it coming so much blood. There are just theories about it, right now we believe that Assef also used rocks of the size of a hand palm to torture him. There have been discoveries of rocks near the crime scene that were brick coloured due ti the stain through out the years.ç

Now that we know the truth, for everyone that forgot that old fallacy, recommend your friends to read this report, they are not going to believe you, only a important program like us can change their mind.

Also it would be a good idea if you read the novel again, at least the first part of the story, you will find a lot of interesting connections between the real scene and the rest of the book.

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Rationale

Rationale

I did a news report, first because I think that that part of the book is not explained very well so I thought that I would be a good idea to change part of the story, second is because I want everyone to hear, to read my report in a professional way.

My idea was to create an alternative scene that fits the real story, there is why I try to use a lot of arguments, to support this creation.

I wanted to create an alternative scene that shows how bad can things be interpreted, I wanted to change the original idea of a rape moment to a brutal moment that fired the story.

Is news’s report, so I used a formal type of language, except for the quotes because I try to make that expression realistic as possible.


My target audience is everyone that for some reason didn't like the scene and wanted another one.

jueves, 31 de julio de 2014

The Kite Runner review

You are a guy interested about culture? Or it doesn’t is what you like to talk about…? The book of the kite runner is calling you, made by the greatest, Khaled Hosseini.

The kite runner is the history of two afghan friends that love a native sport called Kite Running but the are some differences between them that are going to make their lives harder as it was supposed to be.

The story is about Amir, the main character, and Hassan both of them are part of different ethnic groups, near the year 1976. The first one, Amir, is a Pashtun; Pashtuns are the high ethnic group in Afghanistan, while the low ethnic groups are the Hazaras, like Hassan.  But the fact that both of them are good friends but are from different groups is going to call the attention of some people around there.

There is another thing that is important in the history, the family of Amir, the main character. There is just Amir and his father, Baba, the mother died while she was giving birth to Amir, something that Baba is not happy about. Maybe they are a family, but the hate from baba to his son is real, he says that is his fault the death of his wife. Now Amir is going to fix their relation with the help of Hassan, and try to gain his honor, how? Winning the kite runner competition, a battle were the last kite flying wins. He is going to make it?


I am not going to talk about that, the true is that is a history that leaves a lot of things to think about, a great book with a interesting message behind. 

What kind of detail do you need to include?

Be very detailed about the culture.

Think about the kind of publication you are writing for.

For a block in the newspaper called "reading zone"

What is your role as a writer: superior, expert, peer, friend, and advisor?

Friend.

Think about your audiene you are writing for.

Novel readers.

Figure out your attitude: clever, humorous, intelligent, opinionnated, balanced.

Opinionated.

What rating sytem are you going to use?

Star rating system.

How to start? What will be a good lead-in or attention grabber?

Be friendly trying to call the attention of the people and then talk about the book.

Figure out the key points to write about and their order.

Culture and the relation between.

How much background and context do you need?

As much to understand the situation.

jueves, 27 de marzo de 2014

The Deeps City

The Deeps City

What would you think if one quarter of your country, moved to the deeps of the sea? Well, that is the case of China, one quarter of the   Chinese people has moved to the Taiwan Island just three years ago.

The people moved due to a strange plague called the ´´White Plague`, a mortal sickness that attacks al the vital structures of the body. Because of this, Chinese people are trying to scape from China. Right now the name of the city is the´´Dae Wan Kenobi``.

The great city of the deeps ´´Dae Wan Kenobi``, is exactly as a modern city, a variety of different resources, good opportunities for a healthy life, a good education, the basics services, etc, Making the city of a solid choose for tourists and natives people.


The guy who founded the deeps city, ´´Dae Wan Kenobi``, was the millionaire German Hufflepuff, who spent 30$ millions of dollars in the construction, to contribute the Chinese people. Also he declared that the president of the city would be Mathias Poppy. Mathias talked about the possibilities of the deeps city: ´´the city of ´´Dae Wan Kenobi``  is just starting, in a future it will be so powerful like the old China``. Right now the city is under the eye of United States governmentuna-ciudad-sumergida-en-el-2_590x395.jpg

jueves, 28 de noviembre de 2013



My caption:

Parent approved video games that are placed in moderation can help young kids develop in educational, social and physical ways.

What I have learned:

Video games are a good way to have fun if they are played with moderation.

1 Support:

Is true that there are bad things about video games, but also there are plenty of good things related to video games.

Source: BBC.com

2 support:

Depending on the video game, the player will have to think.
Shooters: think fast, react quickly.
Puzzle: process fast information

In a experiment about games, gamers were faster than non gamers in the puzzles that they gave.

Source: BBC.com

My opinion:

In my opinion video games are a good way to past time if they are played with moderation and control, also that some video games could help someone to develop in educational, social, and physical ways.

Ideas:
1. Video games are not bad at all
2. Your control will make you a healthy player
3. Your way to act depends on the video games.

lunes, 11 de noviembre de 2013

martes, 29 de octubre de 2013

Tattoos

Tattoos are body paintings commonly for men that sometimes (only sometimes) represent something, in wich you are good. In other cases it is just a painting that just looks cool.

Now a days, tattoos are considered the lowest way of (considered by people of the society) expression, because they are stupid and makes you dumb and delinquent.

Tattoos are not bad, they are just another way to feel fine with yourself, like dyeing your hair, piercings and other body cosmetics.

They dont make you stupid, you are like any other guy in this world. The guys that offend tattoos have a really limited mind, because they cant accept another way to see your body, something more spiritual.

Also tattoos are part of some old cultures, they were used tu classify the possition of the man. Probably, these old tattoos have lasted until these days, so some people could be using tattoos as a tradition.

If you want to use tattoos, be free to use them and dont leave others to boyher you.